Not much detail here. You need to consider exactly what needs to be done, who is going to do it, when and how. You state that Amandeep is going to improve transitions between the scenes - which scenes and how is it going to be improved? What exactly are you going to be improving? Each group member needs to be responsible for something and it's not clear for this who is doing what. You state that you are going to reshoot scenes - but what are you going to do differently here? This needs to be posted after the feedback, and after the first draft of the film.
Not much detail here. You need to consider exactly what needs to be done, who is going to do it, when and how.
ReplyDeleteYou state that Amandeep is going to improve transitions between the scenes - which scenes and how is it going to be improved? What exactly are you going to be improving? Each group member needs to be responsible for something and it's not clear for this who is doing what.
You state that you are going to reshoot scenes - but what are you going to do differently here?
This needs to be posted after the feedback, and after the first draft of the film.