Ranita, I can see that you have tried to show us the process of how you created your draft and you have explained the set by step journey in some detail. There seems to be a lot of the process missing. This is demonstrating how you have put the draft together but you need to show evidence that you have considered different ideas and evidence of you testing ideas with your target market. Your image for example, why did you decide to use that image? Were there other images that you considered? Why that strap line? Why those colours? Why that background? All of these decisions need to be evident on the blog.
Ranita, I can see that you have tried to show us the process of how you created your draft and you have explained the set by step journey in some detail.
ReplyDeleteThere seems to be a lot of the process missing. This is demonstrating how you have put the draft together but you need to show evidence that you have considered different ideas and evidence of you testing ideas with your target market. Your image for example, why did you decide to use that image? Were there other images that you considered? Why that strap line? Why those colours? Why that background? All of these decisions need to be evident on the blog.