- The use of sound was good, it completed the horror movie and made the horror film what it is.
- The story like worked well and it flowed well. It did not confuse the audience and the audience were able to follow the story line well.
- Overall, the film worked well. If the suggested changes are to be completed, the film will be on its way.
- The editing of the film was done well.
EBI:
- The sound in the film could be brought in. Where the sound is quite and soft and then the sound builds up as this will build up tension.
- The character's voice was distorted by the wind when filming outside. Therefore, that can be changed by doing a voice over.
- The person who is possessed at the end, 'Amandeep's' eyes could be a different colour, eg; completely black or red.
This could then be completed by having a close up shot of Amandeep's eyes at the end. - When 'Rajveer' jumps out and scares his friends, he could wear a white sheet as a Halloween costume, where then the white bed sheet can be used as an object of significance.
It would have been more helpful to have used a WWW and EBI structure for this.
ReplyDeleteYour structure is all over the place and is confusing. The feedback should have been posted after the first draft of the film.