You state that the title has 'been played around with' but you need to be more specific - how? What is the effect? You state that 'you get a close up shot' and 'you can hear the ticking' - you are identifying and you need to explain why they are being used and the effects achieved. You state that the pace picks up but you need to consider how the editing contributes to this effect. A jump scare of what? Make sure you are fully explaining the points you are making.
You state that the title has 'been played around with' but you need to be more specific - how? What is the effect?
ReplyDeleteYou state that 'you get a close up shot' and 'you can hear the ticking' - you are identifying and you need to explain why they are being used and the effects achieved.
You state that the pace picks up but you need to consider how the editing contributes to this effect.
A jump scare of what?
Make sure you are fully explaining the points you are making.