See comments above with reference to what you should be commenting on. Ideally, you need to look at a professional review from a recognised film website or magazine - as you will be expected to create a professional review yourself, it will be more useful to analyse one of these. You state that he comments on screaming and his girlfriend - instead of stating what he has written - consider instead the fact that he is using humour and why this is effective.
See comments above with reference to what you should be commenting on.
ReplyDeleteIdeally, you need to look at a professional review from a recognised film website or magazine - as you will be expected to create a professional review yourself, it will be more useful to analyse one of these.
You state that he comments on screaming and his girlfriend - instead of stating what he has written - consider instead the fact that he is using humour and why this is effective.