You need to sort your columns out - there seems to be a big gap in the middle of the page. You need to bring everything in to the centre of the page. The review reads a little bit too colloquial - it's almost like you're having a chat with a mate. This needs sorting. You also make a lot of reference to how bad the acting is, but then contradict this later when you say that the acting was good. Keep a consistent viewpoint throughout. You also need to be more specific - don't just keep saying the acting was really bad - be specific and make reference to particular instances - you do with one but more is needed. There is no plot overview or any details about the actors - you need to go back to your research and look at these features closely so you can incorporate these into your review. Keep an eye on your spelling and some words have not been separated, particularly in the final paragraph.
You need to sort your columns out - there seems to be a big gap in the middle of the page. You need to bring everything in to the centre of the page.
ReplyDeleteThe review reads a little bit too colloquial - it's almost like you're having a chat with a mate. This needs sorting.
You also make a lot of reference to how bad the acting is, but then contradict this later when you say that the acting was good. Keep a consistent viewpoint throughout. You also need to be more specific - don't just keep saying the acting was really bad - be specific and make reference to particular instances - you do with one but more is needed.
There is no plot overview or any details about the actors - you need to go back to your research and look at these features closely so you can incorporate these into your review.
Keep an eye on your spelling and some words have not been separated, particularly in the final paragraph.